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Re: Luna 2.1
And here I am again. :D Ready for chapter two! Once again, I think this was a good chapter for developing Asha. The scenes showing her relationship with her father ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Three
Hi Attolia! I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again—I loooooove Adele. She makes for an absolutely FABULOUS villain protagonist. She’s just so deliciously manipulative and cold, and it makes ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Zan-tastic Free Reviews (Open!)
The review for Luna Ch. 1 is up, later chapters to come~. ^_^
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Luna 1.0 (edited)
Hello, pinkangel! Zan is here as promised. : ) I have to say that I really, really like Asha. Her plight just makes it really easy for me to feel ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Zan-tastic Free Reviews (Open!)
The review for The Ringbearers Ch. 2 is up. ^_^
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: The Ringbearers - Chapter 2
Hi, ultraviolet! I’m here as promised. : ) This is another chapter that I quite like. It was pretty interesting to see the consequences of what happened in the previous ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Zan-tastic Free Reviews (Open!)
Sure, I'll get to the first chapter as soon as I can. ^_^ I don't mind long stories-- In fact, I like them, it's a lot easier for me to ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Zan-tastic Free Reviews (Open!)
Absolutely! I really liked your first two parts, and I'll get on the second chapter ASAP!
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Leander's Story pt. 3
And hello again, lunahlove. Sorry I’m late—it’s been quite a week. Anyway! This was another interesting chapter, and I really like the developments here. It was really kind of neat ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: The Eagle's Nest Prologue + Chapter One, Part One
Hi papersolstice! I’m Zan, and I’ll be your reviewer for today. Ok, first things first, your question: You can’t really indent paragraphs on YWS, so its easiest to just hit ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Zan-tastic Free Reviews (Open!)
Hi there! My previous Will Review for Food Thread kind of died when I had to take my school-related break from YWS, but now that I'm back, it's open again, ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: The Ringbearers - Chapter 1, Part 2
Hi again, ultraviolet! I’m back for the second part. : ) The first thing I noticed in this chapter is that I really like how your narrative voice is developing. ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: The Ringbearers - Prologue and Chapter 1, Part 1
Hi there, ultraviolet! I’m Zan, here to review~! First of all, I really like the concept behind this story so far! One thing you do really well is manage to ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: Leander's Story Pt. 2
Hi again, lunahlove! I really like this second chapter very much, it gets the plot moving forward very quickly while introducing a little bit more of Leander’s world and her ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: Lovely Heart chapter 3
Hi there, Legendaryrose! We meet again. : ) How are you? I really enjoyed the previous two chapters, and I must say that I really like this one as well. ...
Jun 2, 2010
