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That's horrid. Absolutely horrid. I couldn't even finish reading it. It's just terrible to think that there's someone out there who would say that kind of thing to a person, ...

I don't think it was really all that bad. The pacing did feel a little fast, it was kind of like, "wait, hang on, what now? That was sudden..." I ...

(Quick note: The first chapter can be found here: I know it's been awhile since I posted... I really am shy about sharing my work on here, I just don't ...

Ah, yes, getting moved across the country for the sake of one's dad's job. I feel even more like I can identify with Jena. XD In any case, I'm enjoying ...

Nice one! You're characters are interesting and quite fun already, I can really relate to Jena, and Clarke reminds me of a lot of people I used to know in ...

thanks very much!

~~~ {Part I:Subject 13 H15387924 (Yoake Village)} ~~~ Chapter One- A Strange Awakening You know, I bet the average teacher could spot us right off. Most students probably can too ...

Wow! Very well written. I especially like Naia's characterization. You really know what you're doing! I really have no critique. Keep going, can't wait for chapter 3!

Wow! That was a very good start to a story. I agree with WhatIsWhy, the flashback had me confused for a second there, but other than that, this was really ...

Umm... well. I just created an account here, obviously. I'm not a particularly skillful author, so I'm very, very nervous about posting stories out among people much more clever and ...