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Aaaand I'm as late as ever. *eternal shame* “This isn’t about the French class you haven’t even been to in three years, Eric,” This phrase just sounds awkward to me... ...

Wow. That was awesome, Razor. Whole new levels of pure awesome. I absolutely loved it. I adore the title, by the way. I did think there were a few sentences, ...

Chapter Eleven: The Traitor of Terra “Y-yes.” I say, “Yes, I do have a problem with that.“ Kagami? It can’t be the same Kagami, can it? I mean, how can ...

Chapter Ten- The Little Spy and Her Story “Sae Noridsemi.” Attaraya says with ice in her voice. The girl stares back at her mutely. Attaraya looks a bit taken aback. ...

Ooh, this was pretty good. ^_^ I really liked your beginning, it pulled me in immediately, made me interested. I really liked your characters, I'm impressed with how you managed ...

Hey there! I don't read this kind of story very often, so I can't offer much over whether it was cliche or not, but I'll have you know that I ...

I love how there's a brick on the cover of the book. XD Every tiny sound started to wear on my nerves. This sentence was a bit redundant, since you ...

Brilliant flames crept up into log homes. Trees were splintered. Villagers were racing to put out the fire. Smoke slithering into the dark, night sky and Aly was dumbstruck. The ...

Aw, but I love AI. T_T (And just when I was planning to draw you fanart, too. XD) No giving up! Always remember that if your writing is bad, then ...

More lateness from me! Gah! I'm sorry, I thought I'd already reviewed this. *forgetful* I’d only been there nineteen years, and I was still stuck where I’d started from – ...

Whee! New chapter! And a cliffhanger! How dare you! :P Now I really can't wait for more! ^_^ This one was great, you're really stating to develop your characters, and ...

Chapter Nine- Irim Kuarth “Well.” I say. “That’s convenient.” “Is it?” says the guard who, evidentially, is Attaraya. ”Why is it convenient?” “Listen” I say, “on our way here�

Hey there! Looks like you're new to YWS, welcome! Ooh, I'm intrigued. This is a pretty strong beginning. I'm very curious to hear more about your characters, I can't wait ...

Another great chapter, yay! I'm really starting to like Aly's character, and the story has really drawn me in. ^_^ The two girls found a tree stump and Aly sat ...

Ah, you lucky snow day people. I miss the snow. XD I live in Phoenix and it's 60 degrees and very sunny. Good news for the Super Bowl fans, less ...