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Chapter Eighteen: A City to the North “Emma?” Iarin asks. “Yeah?” “I-I’m sorry, but I... I want to make sure you understand something.” Her expression is set, her grey eyes ...

...I am so totally on time here. Don't believe what those clocks tell you. They're lying, lying, I say! *ahem* XDD So! Great new chapter, I still love your dialogue, ...

Late review is laaaaate.... [broken record] Wow, what an awesome chapter! I really like how the prologue is getting tied into this, your plotline is definitely interesting so far. And ...

Hooray, more awesome! I’m really enjoying this story, so far, it’s been really excellent—compelling characters, great prose, an interesting plot. Great work. Really, splendid job with your chara

Chapter Seventeen: The Hralhym's Question Kagami leaves the cell, Koreth following, and they disappear up the steps and into the darkness. Kagami doesn’t close the cell door behind him. He’s ...

Hmm... I know what you mean. I don't know if I could accomplish it myself, but when I saw the title of this thread, I automatically thought of Nathaniel (and ...

(actually...I kind of wrote them intending their relationship to have a romantic subtext, XD You know, it's funny, because I thought the same. The whole time I was reading this, ...

Sorry this took so long, I’d been planning to write a review all weekend, but I got kinda busy with a whole bunch of random things. XD Anyway! Quite an ...

Well, here we have another chapter! Not bad at all, I thought your magical artifacts seemed interesting and original, and I really like your characters and world. I think it’s ...

*is rather late* >_>

*pokes head in nervously* Hi there! If you're not too busy, would you mind taking a look at Land of Sky, Land of Rain? That link is for chapter one, ...

~~~ Part V: The Greatest Spell, The Greatest Sacrifice ~~~ Chapter Sixteen: Koreth’s Sacrifice I can’t find the words to speak, I can’t find the strength to move. I don’t ...

OMG, I'm sorry. This is really late because I'm just a jerk like that. Sorry! My school year is scary already, and it's only going to get worse OTL. XD ...

Hi there! Not a bad chapter. This one had a lot more work in character and plot development than the others, and I must say I’m enjoying this. Your characters ...

Yes, I will. Sorry! Last week I was a little busy with some last-minute summer homework, but I'm done now (Just in time for school on Monday. XD) Oh, and ...