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Yay! I absolutely adore Terry Pratchett's works, and this is one honor that's totally deserved. ^_^

Hi there! I'm Zan, nice to meet you. ^_^ Augh, that's the worst. Don't worry, it's not that uncommon-- one of my best friends actually lost a flash drive with ...

Hey there! I know I’m awfully late with this, I’m sorry. Anyway, I think once again, this story is showing a lot of potential. I really like Neil’s character, and ...

: D Bizacker! I’ve missed you! (Also: You’re a Watchmen fan? No kidding? *squee*) Ahem, back on topic. XD Well, I know I’m not a huge, amazing writer, but I ...

Whyyyy am I never on time like a good reviewer~? *angsts* XD Anyway, here I am. Anyway, whee~! Much as I loved the other character perspectives, it’s great to be ...

Chapter Twenty-Three: One of the Circus Freaks “Kagami.” “Yes, I know who I am, thank you very much,” he tells me, “The question is, do you know who you are?” ...

Hi there! I know I’m a bit late with this one as usual, sorry. XD Anyway—this was a brilliant chapter. I really enjoyed the change in perspective here, showing us ...

*randomly pokes head in* Hi there! ^_^ I think this is definitely a good start to the story—I’m curious to know what’s going on with Reina, and Deita seems likable ...

Hi there—I know this is dreadfully late, sorry. My school life has been a little nightmarish lately. XD Anyway! I thought this was a really strong chapter, it impressed me ...

All right, here I am! ^_^ Another very good chapter, I’m enjoying how this story is shaping up. I really like your main character, and you narrative voice is really ...

Whee, another chapter! I enjoyed reading this, it was a lot of fun. ^_^ I liked the character development between Clover and Ivory here, watching Clover get over his shyness ...

Hi there! I’m here, as promised. Late though. XD Sorry. I really like your voice in this piece, it helped us feel immediately like we knew Logan and understood him ...

Chapter Twenty-Two “Kathleen...?” I ask, tentatively. The others stare at me. Then, Iarin gasps and points at something over my shoulder. I whirl to see the Wraith dissolving into thin ...

Sorry that this one is so short, I had a ridiculous amount of difficulty trying to come up with something to criticize about this chapter. Matter of fact is, I ...

Wow. I really think this chapter is a big improvement over the previous one. The character development was much more believable here, and in turn, it helped make your characters ...