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Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Five)
Chapter Twenty-Five: Rift My hand breaks into a horrible, convulsive shudder, starting at my shoulder and racing down to my fingertips, until the leather-wrapped hilt of the sword rattles against ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: [deleted]
Hi there! I wanted to pay you back for the lovely and helpful critiques you’ve left on LoSLoR. Sorry this is a bit after the fact—I’ve had a Speech and ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: No title...yet (prologue)
OMG. The Carmenita and Alejandro story! Yay! ^_^ I've been looking forward to this, as you know-- and I'm glad to have a bit of it to read, even if ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Queen of Water
Hi there! I wanted to pay you back for your wonderful critique on Land of Sky, Land of Rain earlier. I'm afraid I'm a poor judge of poetry, but I'll ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Four)
Chapter Twenty-Four- Eri Said, Kill Him After about half an hour of walking north, I finally see to vague figures standing on a hill at the horizon. “Kagami!” I shout. ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 13
Hi there! Sorry this is a few days late, I’ve been feeling kinda tired and sickly lately. XD But after all the kind reviews you’ve given for LoSLoR, I realized ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: The Artist
Thanks so much for your advice, both of you! ^_^ You bth bring up really good points. The only real problem I had was between the first and second stanzas, ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Would anyone like to fill out a questionnaire??
Hey there... uhm, I'm really, really sorry, but I accidentally deleted the PM with the questionnaire in it while I was cleaning up my inbox. ...can you resend it? Sorry.
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathon Stroud
YES. This is basically my favorite series of books... ever. I've almost never laughed so hard at a book, and barely ever come to love a group of characters more. ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Accidental Rebellion, Prologue
Hi there! Haven’t seen you around much, so welcome to YWS! ^_^ Okay, first things first, I really enjoyed this piece. ^_^ I thought it was extremely well-written, and I ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Would anyone like to fill out a questionnaire??
I'd be glad to help as well. ^_^
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Magius Trilogy Book I: The Black Emerald
Hi there! I haven’t seen you around before, welcome to YWS! ^_^ Well, this was interesting to read. I liked your characters very much, it was easy to sympathize with ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: The Artist
Warm charcoal against cold white sky Line after line, line, line— This is not a city but a keep And sometimes you have to build walls. Scratch them out on ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: What do you think about the preface to my story?
Hi there! You might want to be a bit more patient, sometimes it takes people awhile to reply to things. ^_^ I know I've got chapters of my story weeks ...
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: I need... advice.
Wow, that does sounds really interesting. I definitely like the idea, and if it was well-written and the characters were likable, I'd definitely read it. So yeah, if the idea ...
Feb 28, 2009
