zankoku_na_tenshi

Hey there! I’m back, and somewhat punctual this time! Who would have thought! I really like the change in perspective in this chapter, it helps to develop Noora’s character which ...

Ah! Forgive me, I didn’t even know this was online! I really like how you’re developing your world and characters here—you do a good job of hinting at things and ...

I dunno. XD I'm more of a writer, I think. I love to read other people's stuff, but I'm shy about critiquing most of the time; I feel like I ...

All the time. XD One of the first stories I ever wrote seriously is from... like, seven or eight years ago, and it's atrocious. It was about the Pilgrims, but ...

Hey there! I'll admit I'm not a perfect romance writer either (I've been criticized a lot for the main romantic relationship in my current work, and I'm trying to learn ...

Hey! I’m finally here! XD Okay, let's get right to the story. ^_^ You did a really excellent job with characters, as ever—I really like your characterizations of Nendo and ...

Yay, finally here to write a review! XD Always glad to read more FLT. This chapter was great—certainly not as bad as you seem to think it was. ^_^ I ...

Woohoo, next chapter! I think this one was also really well-written; you did a good job of revealing just enough information, without giving too much away and without infodumping on ...

Hi there! See, I told you I’d get to it. XD This is, in my opinion, considerably better. I really liked the previous opening, but I agree with you that ...

Okay! Sorry it took so long to get this read for you—I’ve been a little busy. Well… that certainly was wacky. It was interesting, and I liked a lot of ...

Hi there! Always glad to read more of your writing. ^_^ Once again, I really liked the little details of description you used to show us your setting through the ...

Hello there! Once again, my apologies on the brief delay between reviews. The plot thickens! I’m glad to see you’ve added more characters to the equation, just because with your ...

Alrighty! Sorry this is a little late—now that the SATs are over, I should be more punctual. XD Once again, an amazing chapter. I always really enjoy your work, as ...

OK! First chapter, here we go. First of all, that was a really intriguing and well-written start. I really think your opening did a good job of capturing your character’s ...

Admittedly, yes. XD Not that I've really done anything to make them mad... yet. XD They just intimidate me, because they're such amazing writers... It makes me nervous. XD Don't ...