zalarus

The Heron ( cypress skies; the lands of bounty twirling swirling chaos it went like this: she saw the light but the heron cared not for it he simply flew ...

hmmm... the anger and sadness really stand out in in this one. i've felt the same at times. feeling you're not good enough for your loved one... knowing that you've ...

although this poem relates to me in several ways, and although i do appreciate the effort, i think that you're a bit off. you could use some better wording, and ...

this is a very solid piece of work. normally i'm not a huge fan of rhyming poetry, but this overcame that ridiculous obstacle easily enough. i'd change a few phrases, ...

wow. thanks. i thought it was pretty good, but it's nice to hear it from someone else. if anyone else has a comment, positive or not, please post them. thanks ...

Brain Blaze ( twisted reality so very delightful a nirvana of sound color all senses brain blaze brilliant then die final death praise praise the sun and moon and stars ...

Jesus. This applies to me in a way I didn't think possible. I think that I'm the person that the poem is referring to. Very emotional, very well executed and ...

the eternal dream we plunged through the murky depths of the world laughing our way through the hordes of blank faces and empty seats on the subway. flying through the ...