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hmmm. very interesting. it was actually a pretty good poem. you used your words correctly (something that one has to be GRATEFUL for here), and the subject matter was interesting. ...

this actually sort of, in a way, reminded me of a modernized William Blake poem, in that it heavily referenced fantastical realms and creatures. HOWEVER, i don't think it really ...

well. i really can't say much about this. your complete lack of subtlety and metaphor caught me off-guard. but i won't be too terribly mean here. all i can say ...

hmm. this is actually head and shoulders above most of the poetry on this site, which isn't saying much. but regardless, it was a fairly good poem. i won't delve ...

thanks for the review. you're right about the meaning of moksha. it does mean release/liberation, particularly in the spiritual sense. in hinduism, buddhism (which i occasionally subscribe to) and jai

we're nothing but dancers on a cloud of cigarette smoke drifting here and there, swaying with the wind and twirling to the music of the priests in the temple of ...

Moksha spiraling staircases of infinite longevity arc upwards, climbing to heaven on razor-thin ropes ascending to God and you. harlequin titles stare back at me, ashamed & unforgiving yet still ...

I know its random blah blah blah but to be honest i dont care, all poems dont have to be perfect, like everyone other poem of earth, so thanks for ...

sir, you are a poetic force. i am confident you will be at the forefront of the next great literary movement. anything less would be a gross injustice.

thank you kindly. indeed, this is the product of a mildly disturbed mind.

heh. so goes the story of billy joel. i thought that it might be about him when i heard the words 'piano man', but when he was called billy... yeah, ...

what? this is not a poem. it doesn't belong here. it belongs on a fortune cookie. sorry, but you should take this elsewhere.

a solid poem. the only thing i suggest is that you should make your lines longer. i found it kind of awkward to read, it being all split up. but ...

i like this one a lot more than your other pieces. i'm not even sure there's a specific reason why. it's just a tragic story told well. you've proved yourself ...

ew. not only do i dislike the way you executed this poem, i dislike the entire premise behind it. heh, once again, i find myself agreeing with galerius and errtu2. ...