zalarus

Okay. I've been waiting for this moment. Let me lay down some of the basics. 1. The Mountain Goats - Okay, if you like good lyrics, this is ESSENTIAL. John ...

haha, i would have addressed some of the problems of this poem, but Kit got here first. as i have before, i find myself agreeing with her. and i find ...

hmm. well, first of all, thanks for the comment. i'm glad you bothered with something on this level. i've had more inspired moments than this. this really just didn't...flow, you ...

thankee for the comment. and that line has annoyed me for a while. this wasn't my proudest moment, and i've done a lot better since then, i think. but thanks ...

o internet! i do find it difficult to recognize satire when it's typed out, and not spoken aloud. but the fault is purely mine. i didn't read your words carefully ...

thanks for the critique. after looking this over, this may not be the best work i've ever done, even if it isn't ENTIRELY bad. but i must stress, i have ...

1/10. i've only heard the offspring, and i'm not a fan. not that anyone will have heard of most of the people on my playlist. 1. Hard Row by The ...

well, pretty good! to me, it sounds like some sort of mantra that one would chant aloud, or something of that sort. i'm not much of a one for particulars, ...

hmm. i may have laughed. a little. 7/10.

i actually disagree with most of my fellows who are saying that it should be more concrete. i know, i've said that poems have certain standards before. but i think ...

thanks for the criticism. the poetry of Allen Ginsberg really inspired this, particularly the poems Kaddish and Howl. anyone who liked this one should check him out. several of his ...

A poem is a poem it doesn't need to be great it just needs to be true to what you think and feel. excuse me? what is this even supposed ...

as i walk down the hallway, thinking of lonely Dionysian rampages and you, wishing for a reprieve, madness to take me, it comes back again, like it so often does ...

to Molly well, now you're gone, with your peace and glorious words and i can't help but think of you in this cold and uninviting place like a dog out ...

pretty good. a bit short, but that's alright. you might want to think of making longer poems in the future. and the rhythm was a bit shaky in the second ...