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Re: Effervescence
well pretty powerful. what i want to know is what you were thinking about when you were writing it this this a poem? because i bet it would make a ...
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: Effervescence
well pretty powerful. what i want to know is what you were thinking about when you were writing it this this a poem? because i bet it would make a ...
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: Rainy Day Blues
Well today was a rainy day Today The sky was gray The thunder came. The lighting struck again and again And it rained and rained and rained. Just this rain ...
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: I didn't mean to hit submit
Holy shit dude. this is some powerful writing. is this a rough draft? the last stanza is the best, whoever said it is not doesn't know anything about poetry. The ...
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: Please read and critique! I am starved for an audience.
The night it falls so silently sometimes I find myself caught by surprise. I will wake up from my slumber To my sheets all tangled up with my arms and ...
Oct 25, 2005