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I just reread it and found that my mind skimmed over some of it... I feel like a fool now. Doubting its message. My mind started to skim after the ...

Ashley, thank you for the review. I intentionally left out the character names or introduced their names late. I will consider introducing them earlier, however. I feel like when you ...

Do you mind if I use a couple of these verbatim, I will put you in as Co-Author?

I thank you for your feedback. It's extremely hard to continue it because I haven't seen them in years. If I'm ever back in Brattleboro I can do a sequel ...

This is my first post on this site and your comments are extremely helpful. I know you might not represent the rest of the community but the edits you have ...

I like the description and start. It evokes many emotions. The ending feels rushed. Why are they not defective? What enlightening has the angel come too? What did he realize ...