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This was a great follow-up to part one. It needs a little work as far as imagery goes, but it's a good, solid piece. I could feel the tension rolling ...

Let me catch my breath. Okay. Wow, this was amazing. I felt like I was actually running with the rebels. It got a little confusing, though, when James is tied ...

This piece intrigued me from the very beginning. It was a little hard to follow, but other than that, it was a good, solid piece. Wow. I started to see ...

*Candy's point of view again* Chapter 3—Blood I must have blacked out, because the next thing I knew, I was lying on the sidewalk. There was blood stuck to my ...

Hey, thanks! This really helped! Ugg, how I HATE editing! It is my worst nightmare. Hmph... lol

If you don't mind, I'd like you to review my romantic ficiton piece called Three Things.

Will you please read my romantic fiction story, Three Things? Sorry, I don't know how to do the little link thingy. Thanks!

Hey I have a piece in Romantic Fiction called Three Things, if you're interested.

Maybe someone could fall in love with the priest (forbidden love!), and they start meeting in secret, but someone finds out and poisons him and he dies. I don't know. ...

Hey, I'm sort of new, and I say sort of because I've been here for about 3 or 4 days and I'm already feeling right at home at YWS. I've ...

Hey! I was wandering aimlessly around YWS and I saw that you had posted another chapter of Let Me Love You! It was awesome, as usual, and I'm dying to ...

*This is from a different point of view than chapter 1* Chapter 2—Goodbye “Yeah, Mom, I’ll be there in about five minutes.” “I can’t wait to see you! Are you ...

Hey, it's me again! I just wanted to tell you that I have read another chapter and it's great. The biggest thing that needs work is how much you tell/show. ...

This chapter is just as wonderful as the first! It's amazing. You're confusing me, though. You say Isabella has had romantic feelings for Gary, but then she's breaking down crying ...

Chapter 1—Drunk “Hey baby! Do you mind getting us some drinks?” Jared’s husky voice filtered over the party music. “Not at all. Whaddaya want?” I asked, already knowing his response. ...