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This piece was very interesting. I felt like it could have been an excerpt from a novel, almost as if you pulled it out of the middle of the story. ...

You did an absolutely amazing job with that chapter! Wow! I'm still reeling from it. I loved the twist that turned this whole story upside down! I never in a ...

I enjoyed this chapter. I think you portrayed the feeling that a girl gets when she loves someone who is completely wrong for her, but can't understand why wonderfully. It ...

I really liked this chapter, despite the length. There were a few things that confused me, though, and I had to reread the part where Jessie came in several times. ...

Hey! Sorry it took so long for me to get to this. I was out of town, but now I'm back, so let's get to that critique! I absolutely loved ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I've been out of town. Anyway, on to the critique! I liked the theme of the story a lot. ...

Well, I liked the beginning. It was exactly how I felt about a month ago. You're just sitting there listening to love songs, wondering what the h*** is wrong with ...

*Sam's point of view* Chapter 4—The Garden It felt like my body had been lifted off of a bed of nails. I was floating, higher and higher, until suddenly I ...

Hey, sorry it took me so long to review this. I was out of town all weekend. Now, with that out of the way, lets get to the review. I ...

Sorry it took me so long to review this. I was out of town all weekend. But lets get to the review, shall we? Wow. What an unexpected twist. I ...

I love how you enriched the two main characters. You gave me a reason to love Jessie, and a reason to enjoy Merry's point of view. I like that about ...

Okay, so I've read the first chapter and I am definitely intrigued. I have a quick question, however. Would you like me to go through it and pick apart both ...

*Candy's point of view* Chapter 3—Blood I must’ve blacked out, because the next thing I knew, I was being lifted onto a stretcher and gently slid into an ambulance. I ...

I'm currently reading Untamed by P.C. Cast and Kristin Cast. It's like, the fourth one in the series and so far it's pretty good. Personally, if I were Zoey, I'd ...

Okay, I'm not much for nit picks, you'll have to forgive me for that, but I really thought this piece was amazing. I could totally relate to the rejection that ...