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I loved this! Your writing style is extremely unique. You made a heavy topic of lost love and suicide into something delicate and beautiful. I don't have any criticism for ...

I liked this story. It's very fitting for the way the economy is right now. You did a great job showing and not telling. I noticed that you threw a ...

youreit here, and although editing isn't my favorite thing in the world to do, I read the first sentence of your story and couldn't go on without fixing it for ...

Originally, this was two novels that came to me within a month of each other. I wrote about 20 short chapters of one, and 7 of the other. They both ...

Thank you to all who reviewed this peice for me. It's been a while since I've been on YWS, and even longer since I've written anything. All the constructive criticism ...

Hey there! Well, I'm not much one for nit-picky stuff, so I'll just let you know what I thought. First, I read a lot of stuff on YWS, usually just ...

Chapter 7—His Voice *Candy's point of view* I couldn’t believe myself! First, I kill Sam. Then, I decide it would be good to tell him what I did, editing out ...

Hey! It's youreit, here to do my little reviewing thing! Okay, first of all, there were way too many run-ons. If people can't understand the first paragraph of your writing, ...

I like this. It's like a whole new twist on the best friends in love thing. I want to know what she said to mess it up. Are you going ...

Thanks you guys! This chapter has now been completely rewritten and edited. Tear it apart nicely, please!

Hey, can you review this for me? I just rewrote it completely and I need reviews before I write the next chapter. Thanks! -youreit

I'd have to say Nickelback's "The Long Road," because it helped me get through my first book. Although, now when I'm writing a rough draft, I prefer to listen to ...

This chapter has been completely rewritten. Thank you to all of you whose reviews helped me so much! Enjoy!

Hey there! It's Dink! I loved the flashback, and this is pretty intriguing. I think everybody else got the nitpicks, so I'm going to just give you a few suggestions. ...

I like the bad boy character of Theo, and the way Cierra helps her brother around. It gives her a motherly personality and makes me think that maybe she's going ...