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Well, wow again. I know that's pretty much all I say, but it seems like there isn't much TO say. You say it all in your stories. This is great. ...

The story line is wonderful! I feel myself falling into the chapter, but it seems like when Jay and Gary are talking to each other that they shouldn't be using ...

I haven't read any of your other work, but this was really very good. The slight choppiness of the poem gave it the awkwardness it needed to correspond to the ...

I've never actually been abducted, but the mood and seriousness of that poem made me feel as if I had. You pulled me into the poem, the forgotten girl, the ...

Wow. This is exactly the kind of thing I'd like to tell some of the people who go to my school, and exactly the kind of thing every kid would ...

This piece kind of sums up how you feel when you say goodbye to a place, or a person, or a time. It reminds me of how I felt when ...

TORNADO No matter how hard I tried I just [b]couldn't seem to make the wotds come out right on the page. They were there all right- swirling in my head ...

Still looks good. Gary is quite an interesting character. He reminds me of a friend of mine, actually. He has a big heart, but a bit of a temper. He's ...

Wow. This chapter is very well written. I can't really see where you're going with it, but it has me hooked. I can't wait to read the next chapter. It ...

This piece got me interested. It definitely needs editing, but the characters were intriguing and the plot made sense. I would add a few more descriptions, though. I can't quite ...