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First off, I love the analogy. You paralleled the two things perfectly, and you explained it really well. The only thing I would change is beef up the second half ...

We’re debating our song once again, trying to compromise between our contrasting music tastes with the radio on in the background for inspiration. We switch stations every few minutes, and ...

Hey there! I must say, WOW! That was great. I loved the sentence when you said, "It had been seventy-two hours of emptiness... ironic, really, considering how full to the ...

Hey there! I must disagree with Stella. I thought that it was realistic. I could relate. Just because it is the 21st century doesn't mean that it doesn't feel like ...

This feels like you weren't fully into it. Like Elinor and emmylou1995 said, it fell a little flat. You were trying to make us want more, but all that I ...

Hello there. First off, let me introduce you to YWS! It's quite a feat to have your first work become featured. I've been on for almost a year now and ...

Hey there! It seems that you have been bitten by the love bug. I'll do my best to try and help you out. I'm a 14 year old girl with ...

I like the YWS novels thing. It'll be so much easier to post a novel and not have to count on people to go back and find old chapters! Thank ...

I read your first post of this story, and I have to say, I liked it more. This one lacks emotion, whereas the other had some, if not enough. For ...

Hey comrie, I liked this. It was new, and it didn't make me want to hit the back button and pick another story. Your first line wasn't as good as ...

Hey there! I liked this. I've always enjoyed old fashioned stories, and this one made me feel like I was being transported to another time. I was a little confused ...

Hey everyone, I wish I could tell you all that I'm writing more on this, but I originally intended for this to be a stand-alone story, and I still believe ...

Youreit here, ready to review! First of all, this is full of cliches, which is all fine and dandy, but only if you can make it work. I'm sorry to ...

Hands: I knew these hands. I knew their rough push, and the sense of entitlement that followed them whenever they moved. I knew their rude prod, and the insensitive way ...

I loved it! A simple word of advice: Don't turn it into a chapter and write more. It's so good as a stand alone that writing more might kill it. ...