youngwolf1105

thanks for the advice, i don't always have that problem. This is the shortest prologue i've ever written.... scratch that, it's not!

i know it's really short, but i like to make it really mysterious. i'm working on typing out the 1st chapter!

This in only a little bit. I'd decided to break this apart from the 1st Chapter.

Life had never meant much to me. I'd been careless, reckless even, if there was a difference. I just hadn’t cared. But that all changed within a week. Then after ...

wow, i like this. but you're gonna have to watch it to make sure you don't lead off to another direction

i wouldn't recomend going into it so quickly, but i think it's really good! maybe revise it just a little to give more of a background to Sre.