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Thanks for your reviews and I needed the critism, cause I often have tesh problems. And I wanted to show you something. I didn't want to reveal the meaning of ...

Hey, wassup? I really like it!! I write songs too, but none of them are as great as that! What kind of song is it?

Hey Drama! I really lked it!!!! It was really cool. I only have one grammer error in the terms of poetry! "The story haunts us," Try this, "the story haunts ...

I like it, cause it sort of keeps you hanging... But I have a few things to say. 1. You keep cutting it off, were there should probably be something. ...

Hi! I really liked it, the much I read. You kind of lost me there. I couldn't really even finish it. But the little I read, you had quite a ...

Thanks Bryan! I really appreciate all the complements! I've been writing since I could remember. And I'm always reading long and drawn-out books, so I think that helps a little. ...

Thanks, and I often have trouble with tense. Thank you!

SOunds super cool! I t sounds like one of those James Patterson books, but one of your own as well! Here's a few ideas! -Istead of the terroists being gone ...

“Hey Regalia, are you okay?” My best friend, Carmen, asked. Her Latin features moved into a puppy-dog face. That day she had her waist-length, dark brown hair tied into a ...

That was great Spark! It has a good message about it. That no one is better than another. That there is none "fairest of all". It also proves that someone ...

That was slightly disturbing, but really awsome! It needs a little revising, but other than that, it was perfect. The stanza were you describe their beauty that draws you in, ...

Are you still pretty new? No worries, so am I! But I still aquire a lot of knowledge about YWS, so ask away!

Lol, I wish my English essays were that much fun. But shouldn't you use paragraphs? Other than that, I didn't see anything wrong with it.

Thanks, I can't tell you how many times I've wrote different ones, but none of them fit just right.

I looked up, Young Writers websites! it was fate! :D