youngwolf1105

Thank you for taking your time and reviewing this. I'm not sure where this is goin, but I hope it ends well.... Prologue The city burned. The screams of women, ...

Happy Late Birthday YWS!

I understood none of that!!!!!!!!!!!! Dang Algebra1!

Lol, you're alright Fizz ;) *me follows*

It's really good, I like it but you only have a few problems with it. 1. YOu need to capatilize your Is, even on YWS. 2. You should put more ...

I like it, but it's kinda boring........ Otherwise good. Try to put more emotion in it! It's dry, like there's nothing more than the words on the page. Try this ...

Sorry if you didn't understand.... 1. When I said it roamed, I meant you didn't really keep up with the rest of it. I can't find another way to put ...

Wow, interesting. Is that from personal experience? You don't have to answer that. But I do have a few concerns. 1. It kinda roams a little, keep on task. 2. ...

That was really cool, I loved it! I only have a few concerns... 1. "Because while Hallows' Eve has passed, the nightmares are here to stay." It'll correct the whole ...

It's really good my little Wiccan, I only have one immediate concern. All of it rymes, except the first two lines. Then I can't find a pattern. So it's all ...

Hey, wassup? I'm Youngwolf and would like to welcome you to YWS as well. Altogether, I liked it. But there are a few things that I'd like to point out. ...

Yep, my good friend, Maelstrom. He actually goes to school with me.

Hey, Young here. Don't worry, we all make mistakes! But I'll point out a few of yours for now! ;) "The Darkness done an evil deed." Try, "The Darkness did ...

All together very cute, but a few proplems 1. If you're going to put creases in her outfit, do it on the side of the marterial. I know she's slim ...

They're good, but amateur. My fav would have to be the red haired girl. The only problem I have is lines.... Daisy Good skin tones going on. The eyes look ...