younglover

It seems like it could be a could part but not a good poem. It needs a lot more added to it. I wanna know who what where when why ...

I like the feeling and the passion you expound in this piece. The mood of the poem is very strongly suggested and it makes reading it a whole lot more ...

I do agree it is much more of a Philosofic thought than dramatic poetry. It is overall good though. If you would like to keep it upon this section though ...

I am actually aware of these and have been to multiple. I do really enjoy the poem though. It has strong adjectives in it that really make the poem what ...

Thanks guys i really do appreciate it! I have always been "in touch" with my feeling so decided to post them in poem form and sing song forms. Really excited ...

Shes the shadow of my life So beautiful and amazing. I can only find her truly when the sun shines high When happiness is here it feels so real I ...