yoha_ahoy

The Doom It begins... the doom starts, the masters of torture prepare. We labor under the weight, we break under the stress. Our brains explode from strain. We wander the ...

Get cool soundtracks to movies you like. That's always fun. My fave's are "Pirates of the Caribbean" and the Lord of the Rings soundtracks. Get some oldies too, like the ...

has A LOT of posts *eyes bug out* and lives somewhere in America... hey! i do too!!! OMG!

Darlin' -The Beach Boys' (OMG I absolutely LOVE Superchic[k]!!!!! They're my favorite band! My fave song of thiers is beauty from Pain. Its so awesomly beautiful.)

I liked the imagery in the first stanza. Very cool. The second is kind of wierd. I don't know how. Lol! and why, may I ask, don't you just kill ...

its good but I think this topic is used too much. the language is a bit... harsh, i think. you should probably rate it so you dont offend people who ...

Yeah, it was mean to be just kind of random and pointless. :P

Yeah, this isn't that bad. I think it's pretty good. I like emotion_less's way of describing it dull, like ho-hum, not dull as in boring, that's good. I don't really ...

This is a beautiful poem. I really, really like it. One thing though... the first line of your second stanza in Part 2 you have "bet us ween" which I ...

I like this. Although I agree with Duskglimmer, you should break up your lines somehow, and fix your spelling. Your text is good you just need to fix the formatting.

I agree with Reichieru. The character does sound a bit mean and selfish. I also think that there is a lot of yelling at the reader which is a major ...

the humm of computers in the school lab... my typing noises (stupid sticky space bar key), and the teacher complaining about the slow computers. :P

3/10 i dont like it. its just not funny to me.

7/10 its slower, thank you, i can read it now. i dont like that color grren though for whatever reason. you dont have to change it lol! otherwise i like ...

Naughty, naughty... *tsk tsk tsk*