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Wow. that's interesting. i can kinda see where you got that from. Hmm... thats funny though.

Looks like I must explain "scree." It's always been in my vocabulary... it must be one of those regional things. It's like scream but not so screechy and rough. It's ...

She's smart and independent She's pretty and kind She accells and acheives She has lots of friends And a busy schedule And is satisfied with life She doesn't exist But ...

The lights go out I'm blinded by darkness Like black tar oozing into my head I'm scared And I'm alone And it's cold The night breaths its death wind on ...

yeah you probably should up the rating just to be safe. some people dont like reading stuff like that, no offence. i like this story personally. interesting. i kind of ...

OMG! thats brilliant! hahaha! thats a cool song though, one of my favorites coincedentally.... you should do something with the rest of the verses then to make it longer. just ...

Well, it's meant to be kind of mysterious. I'm trying to get you to guess what the cool buzz is from, what the crisp black lines are, etc. I like ...

*twitch* I caught that too Misty. Hahaha! It's good though, I like it. Athough I think it is a bit too short. It just doesn't seem... right to me. Oh ...

^ has a cat as her avatar... did IT eat toffee too?????

soft air humming cool buzz silver white shining crisp black lines everywhere neon green flash flash flash plastic snakes dissappearing hard white shell buttons marching militarily cryptic symbols litt

Welcome! Yes, great start. It pulled me right in. I love your physical description of the characters. I always suck at that part. Just in general I think your descriptions ...

A Prayer at the Window I pray at the window with the breeze against my face (soft) because I need you tonight (ache) I am lost (hurt) I need your ...

Ummm... no, not to my knowledge at least. I got it from a computer game I was obsessed with 3 years back. This pirate walks into a restaurant where the ...

I like the topic. Do you know or is it about TLW? Just wondering.... But yeah the repetitiveness of "I'll wait for you...will you wait for me" got a little ...

Fly Take me under-wing I wish I were a bird I want to fly Fly away and leave Leave all my troubles behind To fly away and be free To ...