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I think you're getting the gold leaf part wrong... I figured I might have to explain this anyways, not many people know what it is. Gold leaf is the metal ...

Snow Birds The white dove of peace disappears in the blurry fall of snow The yellow goldfinch flits about like the sparkle of gold leaf falling from a desk The ...

Yeah that was cool. Although in that line is it supposed to be "worlds"? Or I thought it was a typo and should be "world." I dunno. Otherwise, great poem! ...

This is an odd poem where I was in a really emotional mood and everything was all poetic so I broke it up and slapped an ending on which isn't ...

Sorry to say, but the idea is very stereotypical. Nothin new to anyone. It's cliched... ugh I hate using or hearing that word but it is. I personally didn't like ...

Yeah this was really good. I don't know what it's supposed to sound like (you never do unless the author reads it) but it played out like a little rap ...

Cool... I like it. There's not much to comment about on a three line poem but it's good. :D

Hey! I finished too! Now I have one heck of a crappy manuscript that all my friends get to edit! :P

10/10 i just like it... pleasing to the eye. or at least my eye.

I don't have time to read all of it... I see you have added on to it though. I must applaude you for your accomplishment! :D *claps*

Then end of NaNoWriMo is here! Even if you haven't reached your word count, I encourage everyone to continue working on your novel. Make another goal to get closer to ...

Haha! I have never been in a relationship either RiverGirl. I was basically BSing it, off of dumb sappy movies I guess. And thanks who fate loves. I'm surprised in ...

We only have a few days left! I hope everyone is reaching their goals whatever they may be. As of now we have two days, and about nine hours, depending ...

Ok... I had this spaced really cool in the shape of a heart with a hole in the middle of it... but obviously it didn't work. Hope you can enjoy ...

it's awesome! too bad it's mostly gone now. happy turkey day!