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Hehe! Wonderful! I'm diggin' the troll. Nice rhyming. And I love the wittisicm. Good job! :D

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This is good. Interesting subject kinda creepy. Yeah, some of your rhythm was off and it was choppy. I suggest fixing that and a few of the rhyms maybe. Sorry ...

I know this is really crappy still. but I have fixed it. The stanzas have rhythm now (5858) and any slightly rhyming lines have been changed. Suggestions are greatly appreciated; ...

HAHAHA! I got it right off the bat. I thought it was funny... you just have to be a little insane to get it. Hehehe... :) Good job. I think ...

O.o Long for me. Good job though. I like your descriptions. I especially liked these lines: Étrange I have a feeling that the soap is washing nothing away. That I ...

^ Etrange by ConvolutedEmpty

Hehe! Yeah I must agree that this is awesome. Taps into your inner child though many of us here are still considered "children." Haha! Good take on the song. :D

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There's a color used twice? There's blue Blue Jay but one is a color description and the other is the name of the bird... then there a white, a black ...

its Lmao, not an i. it stands for "laughing my ass off." Im surprised i know this sheesh. oddly detailed description of yourself... good job, i think. well, off i ...

Fixed! And I changed some other stuff. Thanks FOTN!!! :D

Updating again! This is update three since I've been here (circa 2005). I am an instructor, obviously. I write a lot of poetry and some short stories. I've been doing ...

Daughter Nature’s Dreams I want to run free through the open plains the wind whipping my mane I want to soar high over thick wooded forests feathers floating through the ...

This a really crappy poem/ballad I had to write for english class. I don't know exactly what to name it still... suggestions are welcome or you can pick from the ...