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I can see it for about 30 seconds. I had to refresh again so I could read the last frame because it disappeared. Pretty funny though. I love you're art. ...

Urn and Ashes I feel so cold and lifeless Like the stone gray urn and ashes Broken and in a mess Set between the window sashes Tears of Death pour ...

OMG!!!! I'm in love with it. I love the rhymes. I just love it. It's awesome. I'm in complete and utter awe. It's beautiful. Plus I read it while a ...

Good job MisterWaffles. Yeah, I was completely bored when I did this. So I decided to just write something fun. So there you go. I tried to loosely base this ...

I loved this. Wonderful imagery. I love imagery. My favorite line was this: "liquid muscles burning black lava flame," Awesome. I could totally see everything. You paint wonderful pictures in ...

I walk to school in my homey city-town Pustulio by my side bouncing up and down jiggle jiggle I am a perfectly normal human worm baby Evil teacher mumbles "Doom, ...

Yeah it probably would be better as prose. But I still liked this. It was a well done scene. Good job! :)

Yeah great job! You're a good poet! (Probably doesn't mean anything coming from me.) I really liked this though. It's my kind of poetry. And welcome to YWS! Haha! Good ...

Cool imagery. I read it kind of fast but it's really neat. Good ideas. I like it. (By the way... origami rocks. :wink: )

^ Lives far, far away

Hand Hand soft graceful elegant Pale, peachy, white, natural Fingers tall, curved, beautiful Nails long, chewed. short Painted green, pink, black, not. Then Falling catching, Falling stopping... Falli

I don't know if this would be helpful but whatever. I would try writing about small things. Write about a whole day in your life. Write about EVERYTHING you did ...

It has been edited finally and changed. Any critques are greatly appreciated! Thanks! :D

This is really good.... Really good. Great imagry. I loved it. Sorry, I suck at critiques. But this is awesome. A tad long though, and the formatting is strange. Long ...

Ok, time for the big reveal. A FotN said... there is a secret behind this. It's a big joke. This was "written" be mostly me with the help of some ...