yoha_ahoy

I thought this was good. I think you should look into poetry. Hey, I started out crappy, but you get better. This was way better than my first attempts though. ...

Another good haiku. Good idea at least, but your first line is 6 syllables long.

Nice Haiku. Good job... sorry there's really not much you can say about a three line poem. Other than I thought this was good. :) Welcome to YWS! ~Yoha

*headdesk*

Nazis

I liked this. It was really sweet. I felt sorry for the boy. I kept thinking that he'd escape. :P Good job!

Oh wow, thanks guys. Haha... what rhythm? I have no rhythm. What is this "rhythm" you speak of? Yeah, but really, I am rhythm-less. This was a fun poem for ...

It's funny that you say it's a "black and white" poem because I imagine it sort of like that. The images I see are in all black and white but ...

Ooh... I like your suggestions Just. I suck at naming things so I won't give any suggestions. I'll save you the peril.

^ Lives in the universe. HA! Wow! I think I do too! OMG!!! *freaks out*

4/10 ...it's an aircraft carrier. I totally don't get it. Plus it just looks funny for some reason. The colors are off or something. :(

Yeah, none of that bothered me. I thought this was wonderful. Very good job. :D

I liked this one too. I also read your other one. That one was good, enjoyed the imagery. Like a very happy and sunny day in a world with beautiful ...

Citrus Mist Dig in your thumbnail And peel off the skin Juice flows from the fruit As the skin cracks And a citrus mist Is released into the air Filling ...

I thought this was good. As everyone else has said, the content is great. A few misakes but you can fix them. A twist at the end. That surprised me. ...