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*poke poke* Anyone? :(

Yeah, really. High school isn't that bad. Trust me dear, it's a big improvement from middle school. People have grown up and are more accepting of everyone. That's my experience ...

Tea Cups of Love I put myself out there gently, sliding a delicate china tea cup across a table. My love in a tea cup, just for you. Me in ...

Right-o with everything. Face it, YWS is just made of Awesome. With a capital A. ^_^ ~Yoyo 8)

How dare you mention that blasphemous word!!! :evil: *clings to remaining summer time* :cry: Though I am a bix excited to start college. ^_^ ~Yoyo 8)

Roy owned the only drive-thru funeral business in Maine. It was a hand-me-down business, to be honest, but pet-cemetery-to-people-cemetery seemed like an executive decision. Roy was an executive, so h

Hahaha! I think this looks pretty neat actually! I don't have much to complain about! You just missed a couple spots with the custom blur in the background, but it's ...

It is quite choppy and it doesn't make much sense right now. The language sounds pretty and you have the seed of a nice idea as far as content, but ...

The Cold He fell to his knees in defeat, his eyes pleading up at me, finally welling with those weak tears. The blood from his chest poured down between his ...

To My Love May this only be pretend, our use for each other as reflective muses. I think if we met, perhaps we'd see how real this may truly be. ...

My Thoughts on My Poetry My poetry is my feelings written down as a complex metaphor in the guise of simple imagery. However, I feel that my best written mysteries ...

Note: Inspired by PenguinAttack's "It's Time." Thanks wifey! ^^ Bats, My Muse, Bats "Let's leave, let's leave as the bristling bats call." They have called me three times. Three wonderful ...

I fell so hard for you I've tried so hard to make you like me To make you laugh To make you want me Very cliche opening lines. I've tried ...

Great idea for content here. Though I must say the repetition of "Chalk to the Sidewalk" at every other line is extrememly annoying. It takes the reader's focus of the ...

I find myself in a need for more points to post a sudden flood of poetry. Please send your critique requests this way!! I will gladly do them soon! :D ...