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Berlin wall? Cool though. Sorry, I really suck at critiques. Nice and simple though. :)

This was cool. It reminds me of the movie "Spirited Away" and the train in that. Good movie too. That's a cool description of a train though. Cool.

Sixteen Years Gone By Sixteen years gone by Pretending not to care If you get a card or a flower When really deep inside Your fingers are crossed As you ...

I'm bad at naming things.

Beautiful. The last long stanza was especially cool. I don't really know what else to say. I suck a crits. So... yeah. Great job though, I love this.

Delicate beauty sits in the shadows Screaming into eternity Dreaming a vision of death In an elaborate gown of black petals Where the sun and moon soar While chanting one ...

Yay! I love eyes. I am oddly fascinated with them. So it means a lot for me to tell you this is good. This is my favorite stanza: "They are ...

Thanks guys! I'll chck those out! :D

Those are really good. I don't think I've ever seen your stuff before. You have really nice clean lines and good shading too. Great job! :D

Baa baa, Twinkle, ABC Baa baa black sheep, have you any wool? How I wonder what you are? QRSTUV One for the little boy who lives down the lane, Twinkle, ...

Hehe!!! I thought this was fun. I don't like to over analyze things so this is short. But I loved the twist at the end... cute. I didn't see it ...

Can anyone give me an easy-to-understand run through on how you play cricket? Basic rules... plays... that kind of thing. I found a website telling you how but it's like ...

Hehe! I like this. It's a very humorous poem. Nice job. It did make me laugh. :)

Home Home is always there Open and inviting Merry and joyful Everyone is family at home. _______________________ Everybody fighting Mom is crying, dad is drunk Oh my God. Home is ...

10/10 Pretty. Looks like an old picture. Maybe it is. I dunno.