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They need to delete or archive last year's posts or something... *grumbles*

Typo fixed. Thank you Myth and Krystal! :)

Thank you! ^_^

Much better than the first poem I ever wrote. Seventh line though, "mesmorising" is spelled mesmerising. Otherwise, I thought this was exteremly well done for a first attempt. ^_^ Keep ...

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Tree Dance On a cloudy day When the wind blows The trees begin to dance Branches bend Trunks sway And the leaves spin and twirl Before being ripped away They ...

I have plots for the next three years. Last year I got the idea for a four-book series. Hence why I already have my plots. But, I haven't actually done ...

Yes, keep writing!!! My first attempts were horrid. (Most still are...) But you do definitely get better! Just listen to the advice everyone gives you. It does help. ^_^ Good ...

Very nice poem. I love the ending. I love the simplistic style and how short it is. I love short reads. :D Good work. ~Yoha

Touching and sweet but not of the highest quality. If it serves your purposes though, run with it. :) Keep on writing! ~Yoha

Coolie! Good job there. :D

Thanks guys! It's been a while since I've written anything really. I'm glad this one turned out so well and that you like it. :)

I still haven't done any planning yet. I probably should now that I think about it. I just don't have any TIME!!! Arg.... But now I am devoted to creating ...

Haiku Words will never win Over the 3D human Emotions of LIFE Muahaha... haiku is the idiot's poetry. Haha. It really doesn't take too much thinking to make one. But ...

Where Are You? Can't you hear my telepathic screams Echoing across our distance? I shred my own heart (everyday) Just looking for the memories of your love I yearn for ...