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Re: Cryptic
Cryptic Alas where I do weep but in archaic sanctuary. No. Lies. I have not cried for two sweet years. Why the habit sudden stop? Love. Makes sense to me. ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Amnesty International
I loved the imagery you created in this. I could really see it all happening. Great work! ~Yoyo
May 24, 2007 -
Re: The Young Writers Society Is Now On MySpace
Woot! Way to conform to society's demands! *dances and adds*
May 10, 2007 -
Re: Vampiress
Hey, thanks guys! I didn't think it would be so successful. I fixed the comma. Don't know how I missed that. Thank you so much though! ^_^ ~Yoyo
Apr 24, 2007 -
Re: Vampiress
Vampiress Bitterly gorgeous rose petals scream sweet, sordid symphonies. Delirious ethereal beings rise up and restlessly seek eternity. A delicate knife in the mist, they rip through time, leaving be
Apr 23, 2007 -
Re: You're Not There
You're Not There It's like looking for you through our secret window, But you're not there. I put my hand on the pane, my eyes strain for an impossible glimpse, ...
Apr 22, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
care to comment?
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: Adventures in Photography
Hey your photography is good. Keep taking pictures! :D I love your black and white photos. You've got a knack for that too. ;) ~Yoyo
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: Nothing Shows
Nothing Shows "When I get back, I promise," she said, the tears welling in her own eyes. "I don't want you to leave me," he said, his tears already falling ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
Untitled I. My fingers are glistening Wet with tears I've wiped off my fractured heart, My eyes unable to cry This incredible sadness I do not yet feel, Still weighs ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Red Apple
Red Apple Kingdom coming, a seedling grows Walls are built, towering overhead Leaves grow green, and turrets spout A tree matures, the men go out The fruit blossoms as weapons ...
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: Connection
Thank you for your suggestions! :D I understand what you're saying about the fourth stanza. And thanks for the compliments. ~Yoyo
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: It Was Time
Thanks guys! I'm glad the content of the story is okay. I seem to be a better content writer when it comes to the romance genre. Hm, maybe I should ...
Mar 19, 2007 -
Re: It Was Time
It Was Time It was time; their time to leave. We don’t know what separated them, but they both had the look on their face. The look of strong life-changing ...
Mar 18, 2007 -
Re: Connection
anyone care to comment? :(
Mar 14, 2007
