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I don't need a NaNo now. I'd die completely. I'm not even sure if it'll fit in my schedule next year, going to college and all. I hope it will ...

Hahahaha! Hooray! Not bad. It even looks like he could be pistol-whipping you. XD Lovely. ;) ~Yoyo 8)

Piper had been walking through the tents and overheard a whispered conversation in one. Being naturally curious, she slowed to listen. "Have you heard anything from our brother?" said one ...

Looks like a case for... "The Grammar Ninja!!!" :elephant:

Good luck, Jack! I must say, it will be odd not seeing your name in red. Hope you are still able to stick around somewhat though. I don't even want ...

Piper walked up to a rough looking character. She wanted to make an effort to get to know new people. Gritting her teeth a bit, she approached him. "Hello. I'm ...

Cute! I think this flowed really well, I don't have much to complain about. I think you've really got the middle school atmosphere down. It reminded me of my 8th ...

(Wow, I'm stealing Jack's format. He seems to have this down. XD) Name: Piper Age: 19 Height: 6' Build: Slender Race: Elf Class: Mercenary Eyes: Brown Hair: Reddish brown, long ...

Ooooh, nifty word. I like the rhythm and the rhyme sheme. The third stanza kind of irks me using "smile" and "smiles" in the first two lines. If you can ...

I write wherever I can, whenever I need to. I only ever need to write when I'm inspried. Sometimes that's when I'm sitting right at the computer. Othertimes it will ...

Seree, you're asking be to write a different story than this is. And you're also asking me to change my writing style. I appreciate your advice here, but I don't ...

A turtle cat.

scotty - I must say that you look good! :p I'm not a fan of mullets though. XP Tess - you're so pretty! I love your freckles. ^^ And your ...

^ is know for loving WICKED!!!! *glomplehugs*

^ known for being purple