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"Who shades the burning sun of Aloneness. When my family Laugh at the dinner table." Aloneness and Laugh should be lowercase unless you're trying to creat emphasis (which doesn't feel ...

Welcome to the YWS! "But words fail me, My pen bleeds... I ponder for words With my pen blotting the paper" The repetition of "words" and "pen" in this bothers ...

I like the mention of the e-mails to her family and friend. I'm kind of curious as to what she says to them. That could be something to expand on ...

My deadline is up! And with my polling done at school and here it puts my tab at exactly 100 people. Thanks for your help if you voted! PM me ...

Small, very skinny, big brown eyes and thin, straight brown hair.

Disclaimer: This could probably classify as PG-13 as the rest of the parts have been, but just for added saftey of the implications in this part I am rating it ...

#3 ftw, Oye! ^_^ ~Yoyo 8)

Wheee! Cool angle indeed! Don't'cha love spring? ^^ Epic. ;) ~Yoyo 8)

Aha! I saw that monkey on on lolcats. I thought it was hilarious! Anywho, here's me in some prom pictures, as promised. :) This is my whole group, and sadly, ...

Oh that's awesome Bear! I'll try to read Sumi's story as well. Can you PM it to me Bear? It'd be easier for me to remember then cuz I can't ...

Ooooh. Wow. This is intense and unique. The imagery of this is so awesome and creepy. Blood-stained snow, crimson ice - great. I don't understand the, "Liquid on fur-like/Cotton-ball floor" ...

Name: Floren Age: 20 Height: 5'9" Build: Slender Eyes: Grey Hair: Brown, thick, a little past shoulder length, usually in a low pony-tail. Complexion: Pale, white Appearance: Pretty average young ...

*votes for Patty with a sponge in her brain*

Interesting... I don't really have much to say about this really. It's good. The imagery is nice. For some raeson though I find it sort of... awkward? I just feel ...

Kitty, I think you just rocked my world apart. That's amazing. That second one reminds me of this really long story about my friend who's a drum major in band ...