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"Her chest heaves with pent-up tears and her eyes remain dry." I hate the phrase "her chest heaves" just because it's used so much to describe crappy romance novels. I ...

Done and done! :) ~Yoyo 8)

Wooo!!! I'm in the top 30!! I didn't think I was on that much. O.o Unless there are unknown users in my town... I hope they aren't stalking me. :cry: ...

XD *huggles Roo* ^_^

Penguin!!! Ahhh! I love it! Haha! And you *are* pretty! ^_^ And I spot a Roo! :D Sheesh, I need to post some more soon... maybe I'll take some this ...

That's such a sweet idea!! Looking at those designs, I definitely love the polka-dots. That's the second link I believe. But if you want to design one, that's totally cool ...

Very cute story. And I agree with KJ, a different hook is very much needed. I thought it to be quite amateur which is quite contradictory to the quality of ...

Very good. I enjoyed your style as well. Just one big thing I noticed, being an artist myself... “Oh, I don’t know,” Marianne lingers behind him, careful to keep her ...

You said make you cry, so I'm not gonna bother with too much politeness. I'm too tired and you know i love you anyways. ^_^ Moving on. 1 - What ...

Okay, wow. I'm back, I think. I tried to get to some of these, but my summer has been SO much busier than I expected, I had to skip a ...

Wow, sorry this took me so long to get to, but I'm still hooked! I read straight through from sentence one which is quite the hook. I'm thinking maybe it's ...

I guessed you were a Rose, Heather. ^_^ I can see it lol. Guess what I am and see if you're right! This thing was spot on for the most ...

O.o *runs and hides*

Hahaha! That is priceless. And I knew that was Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury WITHOUT looking it up, but looks like I got beat to it. Haha. My town did ...

Cal! Welcome back! Glad to hear things settling down well for you. I, myself had been wondering why I hadn't seen your name around as much anymore. Welcome back. ;) ...