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  • Research Re: How do you even tell a story?

    I know, it's a loaded question. But this is a problem I run into a lot. I have my characters, my conflict, my setting, morals, and message but it seems ...

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Research Re: The serial story: could it come back?

    I had a substitute in English once who spoke of flash fiction. He described it as being very short stories simply because in this day and age, people may not ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Research Re: How do you describe the inside of a building?

    I need to describe the inside of a building, but I don’t know how. Normally, it wouldn't be important, but I feel like I really need to allow the reader ...

    Oct 4, 2012
  • Research Re: What to do about Data Dumps?

    First of all, I must tell you: It's not a book, it's a screenplay. I'm having trouble establishing the overlying theme in my plot, which is a machine that allows ...

    Jul 19, 2012
  • Writing Tips Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?

    I live by the creative principle that as long as you are doing something, something is getting done. Be it character profiles or scene outlines, whenever I find myself sitting, ...

    Jun 12, 2012
  • Writing Tips Re: Can't keep my Inspiration

    Kyllorac is right. If you are writing simply for the fun of it, then there is no need to stress. Find what inspires you then immerse yourself in that. For ...

    Jun 12, 2012
  • Research Re: Foreign Languages and Dialogue

    You guys are always who I come to when I have a writing dilemma. :) So one of my newest concerns is with language. I'm writing a book that takes ...

    Feb 4, 2012
  • Research Re: How Much is Too Much?

    How do you know how much detail to add to your writing? I'm mostly concerned with writing that takes place an a very peculiar setting. If I have a scene ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Saith

    Let's start at the beginning, shall we? "Hold still and be quiet!" the soldier next to me hissed. A large figure ran past the building we were hiding behind. I ...

    Oct 21, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: untitled.

    I really liked the beginning, and I really like the theme. however, some of your stanzas seem a little forced. Your word choices are marvelous, but you may want to ...

    Oct 13, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: God's Children

    To begin, I really did like this poem. It flowed rather well and the theme is marvelous. I feel like I can relate to this in my own little way. ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Fire Dies

    Love the theme and the execution. I'm not picky about grammar, so I wasn't really paying attention. I feel like the stanzas really grew on me, like with every one ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Weekend Riot-CH

    Notes: This was part of a short story series I was working on. I was planning on having a bunch of writing, all following a similar story line and plot. ...

    Sep 27, 2010


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