xyberangel

You know when i was reading this poem from like the new poems section, i was reading it and thinking hmmn, i was just thinking about this issue recently and ...

Something I wrote when I was 15... so its not very good. I finally dug it out and decided to edit and post it. There is nothing that lies between ...

Yeah i quite liked this poem as well. I actually came cuz someone mentioned this one in ur other poem, i quite like the way u made the lines interact ...

I found it really intersting and mysterious poem, your imagery was well written as well

ok done re-editing it, thanks for the critique buddy ^^

Yeah i like the simplicity of the poem, and the dark emotions around it which is intersting, through it does seem a little like lyrics because of the repition used ...

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o hey guys ^^ my names Flora actually, i like different types of music like soft rock as well.. like linkin park or fallout ball or my chemical romance. Well ...

o btw this is for an assesment, that i hav to take 2 characters from texts we studied and thats y it might not make much sense

wow really good, i love the way u combined the piano with love, because thats the feeling tat i get when i hear a passionate pianest play, also the way ...

wow really good, i love the way u combined the piano with love, because thats the feeling tat i get when i hear a passionate pianest play, also the way ...

yeah its pretty intersting, sounds a little sci-fi and draws you into the dream I like the last line

Hi decided to join this group after i wanted to improve my creative writing skills. Also because of my friend who joined this group ages ago.

The phone vibrated sonorously in the silent room. Lola grabbed her phone and whipped her head up at the same time. Heads down and pens writing, the class remained serene ...