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Hey Kim again, I'm reading your story again, and procrastinating from studying. I'll finish this review then go back to studying, and read the rest later. Its good how you ...

Hmmn it could be a scam. I never ever heard of a publishing company that actually asks you to pay them first.... That sounds a little dodgy. Do your research ...

The story's building up quite well. I liked the battle sceen which was quite exciting. I think I'll keep reading this. Heres a few mistakes I picked up on You ...

I starting to really like this story, this chapter makes me want to read the next chapter. Kim your so talented for a first time writer, your descriptions are really ...

O ops i read the 1st draft of chapter One. I like how you developed it more, intersting way how to introduce so many characters within one chapter. Why is ...

Hey Kim, I think this is quite an intersting story, I like how you captured my attention right from the begginning. Though i dont understand this line. This child that ...

yeah thanks , I think I might delete some, when i posted it I was pretty unsure whether or not to do so, because it was such a rush written ...

Its really good and I love the descriptions. The guy does seem mysterious and even to the end you dont no what he's thinking, or how it should be interupted.

Hey Kitty! I just realised that your actually 2 months older than me, even through you seen so much more mature. Maybe its cuz ur my buddy~. England is such ...

Just a random poem i wrote a while ago. It's not really good but please comment Insecurity The sound of it In- Secure- Meaning Not secure Of whom we are? ...

Peering through the window That reflects your dissatisfied self. You look at the manikins in admiration and wish to be more skinny. You watch the models go past in their ...

Why is it when I watch you Through closed doors; When the night has come, And you’ve hidden From the world. Every heavy droplet That strikes the floor Pierces my ...

Its a really good poem. The use of the repetition of perfect is good and its not plain at all i like the line Asserting my perfect nonchalance its kind ...

thanks for critquing my work. Actually whats a period as in like a paragraph?

This is a very impulsive poem, just something I wrote while procastinating, lol... I sit there at my table, Cramming facts into The cracks and crevices Of my already crowded ...