xyberangel

After the rain the world is new The flowers bloom to view - The scenery. the last two lines don't flow very well, as in the rest of the poem ...

that was such a beautiful and exquisite poem. I just loved the way it flowed off the lines, it had intersting and suprising breaks of the lines but yet made ...

Wow I really loved this story. It really touched me an I can understand how family members seem to always have a favourite, and just criticise some things, which when ...

You and I have butterfly dreams. Teach me how to metamorphose. ( this line seems to interupt the flow of the poem) as its a imperative, where as the rest ...

In my garden, flowers were like friends; with their sultry bodies, up-turned heads simmering in the bitter acrid air. But then; the plague came. when i read flowers were like ...

what if there were a mirror world and we were the shadows of other people?

Quite an intersting narrative style poem Last night I told the stars to go away and can you believe it? They listened. These lines kind of broke the flow of ...

I really loved the whimsical feeling in this poem and loved the flow of it, tats seems to bring back memories and the lines a winter wind and withered kiss ...

A poem I wrote as I procrastinated over studying.... and remembering my favourite time of the year, partially inspired from a movie called the Classic A red string Ties two ...

Wow it took me twice reading it to capture the meaning, the first cause i was a bit confused. Through it flowed really well, and yet seems to effortless carry ...

finished reading all the chapters and want to say i throughly enjoyed it so far, kinda of reminds me of the twilight series, as for this chapter, it does seem ...

nice chapter i was wondering if ur mc never saw humans before the trader how does she no wat a sock was or how mark got his jeans? like would ...

hey love the tension here and curious how she went from denial to the present situation with mark.

I started reading your story today and loved it so far. I love the undercurrents of romance, relationships in the pack thats developing, and the balance of both human and ...

yea i agree with other ppl, its raw and truthful, i prefer the raps tat r out there tat are more meaningful like this one, and like common's girl with ...