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This story is pretty good. You had a good hook that kept me reading on. you're discriptions were pretty decent and how you described the character's personalities is really good. ...

I overall really think this story has good potential if you work on the little things. But the plot is good and unexpected. I kinda got confused on some parts ...

I really liked this one. Its easy to relate to and very well written. You captured the emotions perfectly both good and bad. How she couldn't be without him but ...

usually when i come to this forum nothing really catches my eye. But you had me from the first sentences and i just couldn't stop reading. This was absolutely sensational. ...