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Author's Note: The second chapter of my novel, an action/adventure story. This is still setting the stage... Read the previous chapter to understand things better. --- FILE 2: Pre-Exposure "Maria," ...

Before I review, let me just say that this was absolutely hilarious. All right! Let's go! “Ummm...Daddy?” asked the little boy, making a low whistling noise as he blew his ...

A little tight, but a nice photo. The setting is such a pretty color of blue! (And, incidentally, I like the contrast - it's the brightest thing in the photo, ...

Author's Note: This is the second edit of the story, so it's not quite perfect yet. It's not exactly your traditional romance, either... Thanks for reviewing. Hello. My breath catches ...

The first sentence certainly is confusing - what's not there, his lip or the metallic taste? I like your narrator, though. He or she is interesting, with that calm insanity ...

Oooh, it kept putting "said" in mine! I had to kill that one. I like it. It's from my short story Dance, Dance .

[Sorry for the long response time] That's an excellent idea. The HI thing is pretty cool, too. Another quick question, though: how will funds be raised? From entry fees? And, ...

There's not really any way to explain to a suspicious or paranoid person that a group of people isn't a terrorist cell, unless there actually ARE some terrorists running around ...

I hate to have to ask, but I was wondering if you could do a crit of the first chapter I wrote of an action/adventure novel I wrote. It's not ...

If you want reviews, try going to the "Will Review For Food" board in the Lounge. There are a lot of people there willing to review stories. You have to ...

Ah! I loved the Lost Colony book! Definitely my favorite - though it may have something to do with Minerva and Artemis not being able to figure out if a ...

I definitely agree with Firestar - I wanted Alex to die and be with his parents at the end of Scorpia! When I saw that there was a sequel, I ...

Gah! Mr. Rochester! You did an amazing job. I've seen so many versions of Jane Eyre, I'm not sure if I've seen this one (oops) but, thankfully, it's definitely true ...

Wow. Super-resolution. :D I liked it. The colors were interesting. Where did the random Mars symbol come from?! Hehe.

Author's Note: Okay, here's the deal. Last year, I wrote a light sci-fi novel about six teenagers who were transformed using a chemical formula into superheroes. The first chapter went ...