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I have a story that desperately needs to be torn to shreds... Golden Spiritual fantasy, in case it matters...

I am the Champion of the Angel of Destruction, and I wield a sword of gold when I come to bless those still living with the Gift of Death. My ...

Well, I am not a bad reviewer, and since I have four classes total this year for about three hours a day, I desperately need things to do. And it ...

Could you review two chapters of my novel? Here and here (Action/Adventure story.)

Something like a horror story about a dyslexic frat boy/sorority girl. The TECH Project

I don't think I've ever read anything truly bad. Besides Eragon, which I disliked simply because the style reminds me of my own before I studied any writing at all. ...

Well, I suppose he wasn't so much a jerk as a chauvanistic pig, but since chauvanistic pigs were so common in those days, he was pretty much normal. (P. S. ...

Heh, point taken. Well, money is god in the sense of Eragon/Eldest/Brisingr. Sadly, I agreed to transcribe a scene from Eragon for my school Drama Club to act out. This ...

Money is God, you know. At least Paolini is familiar with that fact. Eragon is good - as a story for kids, or teens that need a new Lord of ...

Recently read Among the Free. Amazing story. I kind of admired Luke after that...

Also, in Eclipse, Bella said she was in love with Jacob, and then she isn't anymore? What? I really liked Breaking Dawn, mostly because I hate Bella and thought it ...

Personally, I think it's pretty amazing. As a feminist piece, it was wayyyyy ahead of its time, written by a man in a male-dominated society. The coolest part is that ...

Actually, I do something similar - I write scenes that are BEGGING to be written, then figure out how to work up to them. (I usually end up rewriting them ...

I grab a local newspaper and throw something at it. If it lands on a name, I use that. If it lands on an article, I skim the article and ...

Yes, please... It's the second chapter of a multi-part story. In Other Fiction, because it's very light on the sci-fi aspect. Thank you very much!