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Re: Love Hurts---Then It Hurts More - Chapter 1
Chapter One;; Im just going to jump into this, and you try to keep up, okay? Im in 7th grade, my name's Jamie, and I've been turned down my whole ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Funeral Tears
Thanks! :)
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Daybreak
I agree with Fight4whatsright, I think the last line could've been left out, and no one would really notice. Its very...warm, if thats a adjective for a poem. I dont ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Simple Memories
I really like this, I really do. Because, the thing is, that anyone that reads this could relate to it, it being a parent they never met, a lost loved ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Funeral Tears
The girl's body was unaturally still, and her mother stared at her popping a pill. A squell escaped her lips the sound quite shrill. Her daughter was gone. She had ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Night is Early Yet
Hello! (: I like it, just at one point, I kinda hesitated. You know? I stopped and re-read the line, and it just... Do not deny, do not regret! The ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Changing
Thanks for the criticism, Im not too I needed it. I know you mean well if it so much as makes me feel a little down, but thats what'll make ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Changing
Changing... The winds whips at your hair, the leaves rustle through the air. Soon to be green , and soon to be seen. Animals awaken from slumber, and a trance ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Witches
I think its quite cute! :elephant:
Apr 1, 2010
