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Thanks for the welcome, everyone. :) Kathy45622 - I've never seen Prison Break but I might just check it out now. ;D As for Castle, we -cough-downloadepisodes-cough- so I'm sure ...

Well, I was really hoping to get a new lampshade. Now you've crushed me. :( On the other hand, would you mind reviewing the prologue of my currently unnamed fantasy ...

Unfortunately, they're too hungry to care and try to eat Monki.

Julian I remember the day we first brought the boy among us. It was an impossibly dangerous move, but better we'd done it then than later. After all, the boy ...

Pretty good. I think it might have been a bit more organized if you broke it into stanzas here and there but I did like it overall. The rhyming seems ...

I liked this poem. :) The repetition was well done and adds to the feel of the poem. I'm torn between the last and third last stanzas as my favorites. ...

Well. Overall, this wasn't bad but there is a lot of work you need to do. I've only posted a few of the run-ons that need to be corrected. I ...

I wonder why I cry sometimes (This line made me wonder... if you explain it in the next two lines, you don't need this one... Maybe change it from a ...

This is depressing so far, but well written. I like the way you opened the story; it was just what you needed to draw readers in. Just out of curiosity, ...

He was her prince charming, Or so they say - He was always there for her, He'd never walk away. She was the girl Strong at heart; Yet he could ...

xD This was definitely entertaining, very well written. I'm sure writer's block will go running from you, now. I did find a few small mistakes here and there... That's much ...

I just stumbled across this site and am already impressed by it. c: It seems a lot different than the other young writers forums out there. I happen to go ...