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Re: Silence
A world frozen in crystals, ice Silences an angry night; Reclaims the land once belonged, And silences a rageful song. Light once pulsed with vibrant beats, Now dead beneath the ...
Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: Human
A side note, before hand: this is kind of messed up, to be honest. It's... different than what I normally write, but it was an idea, and I went with ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Character's Voice/Personality - Trouble Deciding, Opinions?
I've started working on a new project because I've come to the realization that my old one wasn't all that great. I've got it all plotted out and everything, even ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: With Every Breath There is a Dying Wish
This was interesting. Was this for the 150 words contest? Out of curiosity, what was your prompt? Anyway, this was pretty well written and worth reading, though - obviously - ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Hunter
Wow. I'm almost speechless. Almost. This was pretty much incredible. And the twist at the end was just... wow. I certainly didn't expect for the prey to be a man. ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: For Daddy
You're Your scent lingers all around me. I wish you would envelope me. Please. I'd give it al all to feel you near me again. I'd give it all for ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Closure
I thought I’d be more upset But I’m just in a ret What's a ret? I seriously dictionary'd that and the best I got was 'soak in water to soften ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Withering Love
Wow. While this was a tiny bit confusing to me (but then, I'm tired, and generally don't understand things when tired xP), it was very powerful. Your imagery was amazing, ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: He Doesn't Know
:p The narrarator was a guy. So 'he loves him' was actually right, because there's no difference between 'he loves her' and 'she loves him' but there is between 'he ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: As a child I dreamed of being an adult, now I just want to k
comments changes I know this has already been pointed out, but I'm going to assume your title got cut off. I'd suggest shortening it, so it intrigues us a bit ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: He Doesn't Know
After reading, please read the spoiler at the bottom** He's my best friend. He means the world To me. We're inseperable; Even a tornado Coudn't tear us apart But maybe ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: It Had To Be Done
Woah, did it seem like Shawn killed his daughter? Hmm. Must go back and change that. It was supposed to be like he killed someone else - took revenge on ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
Wow. This was truly the awesomest story ever. It was so awesome that I fell upon my knees and burst into tears (of laughter), but unfortunately oceans don't form from ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: It Had To Be Done
This was written for the 150 words contest. My theme was "justifying revenge, or redemption." I found this kind of hard to squish down into 150 words - originally it ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Writers Block
I'm sure just about any writer can connect with this piece, for sure. :) Overall, it was generally well done and entertaining to read, as well as incredibly familiar. I ...
Aug 13, 2011
