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this was written for a contest commemorating Self-Harm Awareness Day. it placed first in the contest and one a Daily Literature Deviation award on deviantART, but i figure you can ...

i have to say, this is wonderful. you have a way of introducing information to the reader without openly stating it so it feels more natural. also, i love the ...

NIKKI

this is a very original piece and i like it very much :D i've decided to add corrections to the original, in red. "It is a story of two very ...

first of all...i'm kind of neutral to this one. it has moments where i think it's good and then...well, it lacks impact for me. this is not meant to be ...

thank you very much (: ah, that stanza was literally just written in as i was about to submit xD i felt like there was something missing between time periods ...

i like this (: it strikes me as one of those precious memories. is the narrator now an old woman, reminiscing? i feel that perhaps you ought to convey some ...

a poem which was intended to be part of my anthology (: i've already redrafted five times since it was just a note on my phone, but a sixth time ...

it does sound a little clichéd :/ though to be fair, i don't see how that would affect the impact of a speech. furthermore, i don't really see the need ...

heyy (: the meter's mostly consistent, however, i have an issue with this: "And yet again I can’t decide To view with tranquility or spite? The loneliness the night will ...

brilliant! you know exactly what you're doing with meter and rhyming as none of the rhyming feels force and all flows wonderfully, letting the imagery shine through without being overshadowed ...

nettle dreams catch and snag on sweating skin and salty tears, ripping open gashes were smiles used to reside- you don’t know where you went wrong, when the path divided ...

"Like foot prints in the snow, making are print in the endless abyss, we move forward creating our path, just to have them covered ever so fast, just to remind ...