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With the sound of a teardrop falling, The Listener rides the skies, With whispers gathered into his soul, And Eternity in his eyes. With the sound of teardrops falling, the ...

Here we go, chapter nine. This one is longer, but I hope it makes things a bit more...interesting :-) enjoy! Chapter Nine My father is the first sight I see ...

This chapter is short, but chapter 9 is longer. That'll be out in a few days. Enjoy :-) I'm still searching for titles, so bear with me. Chapter 8 “Dang ...

from the title it seems that the focus will be around james, and not harry, which should be interesting, seeing as james is dead. OH! unless they mean harry's son, ...

:'( i realize that legally the parents cannot be punished, but it helps knowing that the guilt from what they did will haunt them. at least i think they have ...

Has anyone heard of the new website ? It's incredible!!!!! Basically what you do is go to the site and it automaticly puts you in the game. This game is ...

goodness, this is incredibly long. i read the first section, so for now ill critique that. Chapter One. The man crouched on the roof of the building waiting for the ...

this poem is rather Hallmark (sp?). it could be on a valentine's day card. im sorry but its terribly cliche. the whole "eyes like blue oceans" and "golden strands of ...

this is still rough i can see, but i like the complexity. i have to say that its typical complexity (paradox i know) but how you sum it up is ...

in regards to chapter 9: i enjoyed how you brought aspects of the real life to this fantasy story, it ties in well. "He still has not signed over the ...

this is a one act play emulating Woody Allen's "Death Knocks" that I'm writing for english class. its supposed to be me speaking with an entity that I struggle with. ...

im not a huge fan of break up/make up songs, i can think of alot of them off the top of my head. this isnt bad tho. keep toying around ...

you lost me. lol first of all go back and eliminate any unnecessary words to make it read smoother as a poem should. "we're all needing that done after all" ...

the "brain pumped with knowledge" could be an outlet into some insight of this character. perhaps he/she is dying because of what he/she knows. if so, expand on that. it ...

the first thing that caught me was the rarity of someone writing about this topic. everyone always writes about life, death, love, pain, ect ect, until everyone is aching for ...