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lol yea french 3!

Yea the french could use a little bit of editing “Je vous souhaite tout le meilleur de chance dans cette mission je vous ai assigné, Lona.” I'm only in french ...

This reads more like prose than poetry. Try rewriting it in the form of a story. That would work better than in the form of a poem. if you choose ...

oh no....emo. bear with me, im not a fan when it comes to emo writing, but there is some construstive critisism coming, along with ordinary critisism. this is better off ...

The piercing drrriiinnnggg of the school bell signals a stampede of students. Don reluctantly stands up and instantly diffuses into the crowd. Anna checks out with the employment office and ...

The church bells methodical toll was the only sound as the people filed out. Every one of them shakes a somber man’s hand as they exit, tears glisten on every ...

i mailed this off to a few christian magazines, ill let you guys know how that goes. thanks to everyone who critiqued, its good to know my writing was relatable.

This is an essay i wrote describing a stereotype i fall into. Enjoy :-) When picturing a pastor’s family, one might venture to imagine a real life “Seventh Heaven”. Many ...

Beeeeep…Beeeeep…Beeeeep…Anna silences the alarm clock with a swift bash of her hand. “Oooaahhggg,” Anna groans as the sunlight singes her vulnerable pupils. She rolls out of bed, narrow blac

Love it, love it, love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!!! That basically sums up my feelings.

Hey there, WELCOME to YWS, we're friendly here, have you noticed? ;-) What genres are you interested in?

the pink in the background goes well with the pink in your lips. your hair color contrasts well with the background and your lips. i wouldve liked to see your ...

nice spookiness there, very edgar allen poe. the only thing i caught grammerwise were when you repeated My boss had said before we're not supposed to take personal calls on ...

Part 1 of Ghosts of a Past Fixation, draft four. A nurse enters the intensive care unit, taking care not to startle her patients. Pulling out her stethoscope, she checks ...

from what i got, she is neither of these 3 choices. she sounds like a sad little emo girl who ran away from home because no one loves her. im ...