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I'm really glad that the twist was noticable. DoctorClicky: i thought of calling him a sociopath, but I'm not entirely sure which on the two words would work best. A ...

So here's my issue: I've been writing and reading nearly constantly since I discovered my love for literature. That was last year. Since then my writing got steadily better, dispite ...

This is a 'character piece' for my english class. Basically i just had to create a character and make him/her come alive any way i choose. Enjoy. Rob, a scrawny ...

this is lovely :-) i very rarely get to say that, but it truely is. I’ve always been a cautious lover, more justice than fortune, with an eye to the ...

this is good, i liked it, it deffinitly has potential. however, i feel as if it is unfinished. you've told us about why mondays are no good, which is fine, ...

Sorry it's been so long since I've posted a chapter, but here we go again! The (still unnamed) story of Julio and Alejandro, chapter 10. Enjoy! :-) Chapter 10 Several ...

dear dear dear, we need to get you some anti-emo pills. Now its my time to go On to different places [s]in the world[/s] To [s]find[/s] new discoveries But this ...

"Can you swim?” Igor yelled to his companions over the crashing of the waves against the side of the plane as Thomas and Charlie clasped to the edges of the ...

Please go back and check for grammer mistakes, such as captitalization. Even poetry (if this is poetry being unique with its versing) uses a degree of grammer. This sounds like ...

Flowering and forming to fit a set mold. Stretching and squeezing into an impossibly small space. Frustrated, I strike my encasement, the beautiful glass cage splits a spider web of ...

Stuck in undercurrents of inevitable events. While the surface is clean and tranquil the fish in the depths are at risk. A fisherman arrives, deals an early end to an ...

awesome short play. i could feel the transition from when the characters stopped being controlled by the playwrite. you might want to go back and check some dialogue though. for ...

so im applying to the University of Iowa's summer writting program, and they require a 10 page submission. it can be poetry or fiction (any genre), or a combination of ...

o and cade: yes you are a very capable poet :-) and brad=incandecence, just an fyi for those who didnt know (i forgot because he signs his real name in ...

smorg and everyone else basically covered it. this isn't poetry, sorry to be blunt but it isnt. keep the emo in your diary. seriously, "i hate my life"? at least ...