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I'm going to be a University of Florida freshman in the fall, and I cannot find ANY writing clubs, organizations, ect on campus. There are also very few classes from ...

I know I am not the only senior out there in need of funding for college, and certainly I am not the only one who has realized that collegeboard and ...

Hey guys, First of all, thank you for the critiques! :-) I made a small edit at the end of the piece. If you all would let me know if ...

I realize that this comment is essentially pointless, as there is no critique, but I had to tell you how adorable this picture is :-D

I think thrown-together pieces are generally the most fun to write, and can be excellent if worked at enough. :-)

Don't worry! I would have assumed the same if I didn't have experience. It is hot though...unbearably sometimes. I really did enjoy the bit that I read; I probably didn't ...

Marshal Apego is searching. Crouched down, leaning on his haunches with his legs akimbo, he resembles his Stone Age ancestors on the hunt for game. His beige ottoman holds his ...

I sincerely appologise for my lack of fortitude in critiquing your piece, but as it turns out I have things to attend to and only have time to comment on ...

Right....well I have no other option but to label this emo poetry. I have a few problems with this piece, but nothing some editing can't fix - hopefully. Sympathy is ...

Ding-Dong. The small store bell greets Anna as she swings the door open a little too fast, and flinches as a crash reverberates around the store. “Don’t swing that door ...

Thanks for the critiques thus far! I'm going back now and fixing the transitions, and right after that I'm going to plunge into the characterization. Even when I was writing ...

Of Sex and Suggestions Ok, ok, I take it back!” Billy throws up his hands in defense, as if his friend’s expression could inflict physical harm. The fuzz on his ...

In a nutshell, this is about an island revolution and immigration. I posted this story about six months ago, but it has undergone so many changes since then that I'm ...

I appologize that it took me so long to comment after i got your email. Your story has been sitting in my printer for no shorter than a month, and ...

I noticed you had a problem with forming conversations, gramatically speaking. "When a character speaks to another, they have to speak in a certain manner," says the professor, "They must ...