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^^that was wicked wicked helpful! thanks :) and i'll work on actually editing it cause i hadnt yet but thanks mucho for the tips

(dont take anything i say wicked personal, i tend to be blunt, not on purpose) i personally dont like most rhyming poems/lyrics, but that's just my personal opinion. This definatly ...

I like the background behind it, but think it could probably use a different way to 'flow' better. love the topic though, and know how things like that can feel. ...

i LOVE the diary of anne frank. and getting the chance to go over to Amsterdam and actually walk in where she had been, it was amazing. and really sad ...

k so i dont usually post my stuff places but decided to try and see :) She has so much, But left with so little, Crying out for help, And ...